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Sales System Foundation Sprint
Proposal — three treatments

Same proposal, same scope, same $4,500 — three deliberately divergent ways to walk Jason through it. Pick the one that fits the conversation.

VERSION 01

The Executive Dossier

A letterpress dossier, hand-annotated: ivory paper, engraved rules, a wax-sealed price — with Blake's red-pen margin notes running alongside the formal document.

Persuades by authority
VERSION 02

The Command Center

An ops terminal running a live simulation of the pipeline. One lever — TODAY vs THE END STATE — flips the whole room: leads, gauges, alarms, everything.

Persuades by demonstration
VERSION 03

The Road Ahead

A night drive that ends at dawn: an odometer tracks your miles, headlights cut the problem chapters, and the sky turns gold where the money is.

Persuades by story